healthcare initiative can be measured.:

NEEDS IMPROVEMENT
1 Explanation of how the success of the healthcare initiative in the case presented can be measured is vague or both qualitative and quantitative methods are not explained. Methods of measurement are not appropriate for the initiative in the case presented.
Additional Comments:Funmi, because you did not re-submit your presentation as required, I was unable to evaluate this objective, so the score remains from your initial submission. Please address the issues identified by myself and Dr. Mast on your first two attempts and re-submit your presentation for evaluation on your third attempt.
Oral Communication PS 2.1: Use clear enunciation, correct pronunciation, comfortable pacing, and appropriate volume.:

EXCEEDS EXPECTATIONS
3 Presenter enhances audience engagement through consistently clear enunciation, correct pronunciation, comfortable pacing, and appropriate volume.
Additional Comments:
Oral Communication PS 2.2: Organize information to be presented.:

EXCEEDS EXPECTATIONS
3 Organization of information significantly enhances audience understanding of both general and specific concepts, and promotes audience engagement.
Additional Comments:
Technology PS 3.1: Use images and layout of presentations to effectively communicate content to a specific audience.:

EXCEEDS EXPECTATIONS
3 Images and design elements are used purposefully, and they effectively support audience engagement and understanding of key concepts.
Additional Comments:
Learning Objective LO 5.1: Identify business risks.:

NEEDS IMPROVEMENT
1 Response identifies fewer than three business risks that could prevent the healthcare organization in the case presented from meeting its financial goals within three years, or the risks are not realistic, or response if vague.
Additional Comments:
Funmi, your response identifies fewer than three business risks that could prevent the healthcare organization in the case presented from meeting its financial goals within three years This inititial risk you pose is not realistic for this case study.

Learning Objective LO 5.2: Develop strategies to manage business risks.:

NEEDS IMPROVEMENT
1 Response describes fewer than three strategies developed to manage business risks, or the strategies do not address each of three risks, or the descriptions of the strategies are vague.
Additional Comments:
Because your first risk is not realistic, you are also one strategy short of what is required (3 risks/3 strategies) – you have presented two viable strategies.

Written Communication Objective PS 1.1: Use proper grammar, spelling, and mechanics.:

MEETS EXPECTATIONS
2 Writing reflects competent use of standard edited American English. Errors in grammar, spelling, and/or mechanics do not negatively impact readability.
Additional Comments:Funmi, I am not changing your score for this objective, but you have numerous writing clarity issues that must be addressed before resubmission. I have provided detailed feedback on your papers.
Written Communication PS 1.2: Organize writing to enhance clarity.:

EXCEEDS EXPECTATIONS
3 Writing is consistently well-organized. Introductions, transitions, and conclusions are used effectively to enhance clarity, cohesion, and flow.
Additional Comments:
Written Communication PS 1.3: Apply APA style to written work.:

EXCEEDS EXPECTATIONS
3 APA conventions for attribution of sources, structure, formatting, etc., are applied correctly and consistently throughout the paper. Sources are consistently cited appropriately and accurately.
Additional Comments:
Written Communication PS 1.4: Use appropriate vocabulary and tone for the audience and purpose.:

MEETS EXPECTATIONS
2 Vocabulary and tone are generally appropriate for the audience and support communication of key concepts.
Additional Comments:
Critical Thinking and Problem Solving PS 5.1: Analyze assumptions and fallacies.:

NEEDS IMPROVEMENT
1 Response is weak in assessing the reasonableness of assumptions in a given argument. Response does not adequately identify and discuss the implications of fallacies or logical weaknesses in a given argument.
Additional Comments:
P.S. 5.1 and 5.2 refer to the development and analysis of assumptions. Typically, when critically thinking about a problem such as the one posed in this assessment, assumptions would be developed and analyzed, prior to developing solutions. This is a method for critically examining the issue to make sure the solution you recommend is comprehensive and reasonable. For example, you might have an assumption that says leadership will be supportive of XYZ. Your analyses would speak to your understanding of this support and why this assumption is valid or not. For the purposes of this paper, you do not need more than two or three assumptions wherein you can demonstrate the process.

Critical Thinking and Problem Solving PS 5.2: Generate reasonable and appropriate assumptions.:

NEEDS IMPROVEMENT
1 Response does not adequately present and discuss key assumptions in an original argument.
Additional Comments:
P.S. 5.1 and 5.2 refer to the development and analysis of assumptions. Typically, when critically thinking about a problem such as the one posed in this assessment, assumptions would be developed and analyzed, prior to developing solutions. This is a method for critically examining the issue to make sure the solution you recommend is comprehensive and reasonable. For example, you might have an assumption that says leadership will be supportive of XYZ. Your analyses would speak to your understanding of this support and why this assumption is valid or not. For the purposes of this paper, you do not need more than two or three assumptions wherein you can demonstrate the process.

Critical Thinking and Problem Solving PS PS 5.3: Assess multiple perspectives and alternatives.:

NEEDS IMPROVEMENT
1 Response does not identify nor adequately consider multiple perspectives or alternatives.
Additional Comments: Please see my comments throughout your paper regarding this.
Critical Thinking and Problem Solving PS 5.4: Use problem-solving skills.:

NEEDS IMPROVEMENT
1 Response presents solutions, but they are ineffective in addressing the specific problem.
Additional Comments: The incorrect conclusions regarding the financial viability of this entity are the primary reasons for this score; once you have corrected this analysis and the comments throughout your paper, this area will improve.

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